Little monk was catching animals and insects and tied them with a rope and made them to die. The monk saw that and he desided to teach the little monk to do not do it again, so he tied little monk as same as animals that little monk tied. The little monk was very sad and he knew his mistake and regreted it.
When I was young I was annoyed by one insect. It was an ant. I hit the ant's leg and arms. The ant felt very pain, but I didn't know that tine and I fell happy and fun to do it. My mom saw that and saved the ant and scole me. After that I never made animals annoyed. I feel animals are poor andevry life is special. Wh should not kill any life, all life is special. I saw one boy are hurting a grasshoper. He is hitting it with chopsticks. A grasshopper tried to escape but that boy didn't let it go. So I felt angry so I asked him to stop and hit his hand. He let the grasshopper go. When I said stop, and I toush him every life is special and you shouldn't kill it. When somebody is hitting you and having fun, How do you feel? Think if you are grasshopper. And than he said Yes, and he never did it again. When I said it, Iwas very proud of my self. When I see one kid do this again I will explain what said.
Babies or very young kids do this sometimes, because they don't know the animlas life is special. They usually hit or kick animals. They think it is fun, but they should be taught by they're parents not to do it when they are young. We should not keep them to kill many animals, and they will grow up with killing things. They will change in to violence people. It can't be fixed when they grow up, When we are late to teach them. They will do this again and again.
Finally I want to say all people in the world. "Don't kill animals, maybe it will come back to you. Every life is special" Thank you
This essay is good but you need to remember to use the past tense when describing examples from your life. You gave some good examples.
답글삭제The conclusion should also be summary of what you wrote in each paragraph. Keep trying!